Thursday, May 22, 2014

1st Person POV Official

*Cries softly in xir hands* I just realized that the flashback arcs for Henry and Drayden are in 1st person but Enia's arcs are all in third person. Not only that, but Enia comes across as a really flat character with no real personality other than her reactions to things. And I hate that. Because Enia is much livelier when I don't write her in script format and she's so fleshed out, but without a first person narrative, it rarely shows, if ever. So now my word count has jumped up at least 150K. Fucking hell, how did I know this was going to happen?

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